by Ben Pickard
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What a lovely little haiku; brought a smile to my face. |
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Thank you for reading :) |
by Naughtymouse
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Totally agree with the other ben...could not read this and not smile...beautiful write. |
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Thank you :) |
by ether
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This is really great because not only did you fit the haiku syllable count - it rhymes so beautifully! Great technique. And such great imagery. 5/5 |
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Thank you so much for the feedback! |