Comments : Just about your eyes

  • 4 years ago

    by Naughtymouse


    This is such an open and honest write it made my heart beat!!

    added to favs, 5/5 Nominated

  • 4 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I can tell by reading this rather personal poem that this person is very special and dear to you. There is nothing wrong by letting someone know how you feel. You have written this with such honesty and thank you for sharing. 5/5 Added to my favorite

  • 4 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    I know that feeling! The effort to consciously Think about the Other is so hard when the feelings are strong. It's like you're locked into a Vulcan mind meld of the eyes & later the eyes dominate all impressions.

    You put it simply and straight forward, as usual, leaving out the ornate imagery in which too many poets get bogged down. I appreciate that directness.

  • 4 years ago

    by Damon Dozier

    Great poems, so far, they all seem to be from the heart.

  • 4 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I love this and know exactly what you meant by it!

    I loved the rhythm to this poem most of all, I really felt like it already had a tune to it, like it was lyrics to a song, like the bridge or chorus part.

    Really great flow and I like the ending line being on it's own, I think this emphasises a lot of frustration on the point that you cannot write about this person no matter how much motivation you have to do so.

    Great little write.

  • 4 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmmm interesting

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    This is an elegant and simplistic poem that is truly captivating to the readers eye, I was mesmerized beyond belief with this poem!

    Everlasting has once again amazed me with her elegance within her poetry.
    Lovely and beautiful reminder of how the eyes hold and lock such beauty and power... lovely poem!!

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A sweet and great piece! Made me smile genuinely.