Comments : First and last love of my life

  • 8 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Interesting since it's quite sad. I would suggest you to put it on the left alignment since it would look much better and to correct the spelling errors.

    This piece is very emotional and visual and it would break a heart that wasn't conditioned if to not cry for certain triggers. That being said beautiful poem, and my condolences.

    - Moria Bella Bair -