Comments : It's an obsession really

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This piece is lovely.... truly lovely...

    with a bit of tweaking, (just a few typos) it really can be a beautiful poem... However, with it being posted in all caps it's hard on the eyes to read.. it's such a pretty poem, that I continued to read from start to finish, but please type it without all caps.

    very very pretty, and Welcome to PnQ :-)

    • 8 years ago

      by Taryn Noelle

      Thank you, I did it from work which is why it is that way, but I appreciate the critique. I was here long ago but can't figure out my log in. If you would like to read more.
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