I so wish I thought of this idea lol don't you hate it when that happens lol

Really great word choice here I love the lay out aswell rolls off the tongue quite easily....

But she must have misread my palm
for I never have asked for another one,
I traveled a lot but no place felt like
home to me. The past kept chasing
at me but I no longer am weakened
by its possessiveness, I believe I can
break free, but she never read that..

This is my favourite... I think this is where I fell in love with the piece

5/5 nominated

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This poem makes me think how we lean on others to help us find our way but then some people can't find our way in life we have to make it happen ourselves. Beautiful.

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Oh this poem melted me... it's dreamy within sadness all mixed into one poem..

the hope and longing to find out ones destiny is a yearning in all of us at some point in our lives and Meme has captivated the readers this week!

What a wonderful piece, Meme, and am glad it received a much deserved WIN badge! I love the way you have laid this one out - very pleasing to the eye, which is an instant plus in any piece of poetry.
All the very best,
Ben