Wow Saffie;

This poem speaks volumes of how much losing something (or in this case someone) can affect how we feel. As humans we can never easily let go of what our memories remind of us, the past is an ambiguous thing and it haunts us until the day we pass away, and in that time we grow from pain and experience. I think a lot of people can relate to this poem as well because a lot of people have lost a child or even just someone close to them. This is another poem that does well to say what you exactly mean and the sadness conveys the message well. This is flawless and I would nominate if I could. 5/5

"In the womb of winter" is an excellent line in the context of this poem.

Its the journey of letting go, and not letting go. The worst thing someone can go through is this, reminding yourself to forget but then remembering what you have lost in the process. It is such a heartfelt piece Saff...