Comments : Of every Season (Contest)

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is so beautiful... just beautiful! I adored this entry,
    lovely piece GB

    • 8 years ago

      by GB

      Thank you very much, I greatly appreciate your words my dear.

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    This is so beautiful Samia..it tells me how much your husband means to you but it also tells me how much you have grown as a poet even in your absence from this site...so many lines I adore in this verse so I will not separate them..simply breath taking!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by GB

      Oh my sweet prof, thank you. It's been a personality contest and actually a great opportunity to express my feelings...
      ~hugging tight

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello GB,

    I am so glad that I have read this. It is both beautiful and full of deep meaning below it's surface. I like the fact that it is dedicated to your husband and this helps me see the images of him, his actions more clearly. 'singing summer ballads in the face of woes' Optimism is a gift that can engender hope, even happiness in others. Such a person is rightfully given praise and lifted to 'superstar' status. After all, if we are lucky enough to have such a person in our lives. A person who is reliable, dependable and open to love and be loved. Such a person, your husband deserves such praise.

    I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment:

    Oh this poem melts my heart.

    Beautifully written, very elegant and heart stopping.

    I love and admire GB's writing. Very creative and unique wording with a style or elegance.

    This poem is just wonderful!!

  • 8 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    I only wish a woman could love me like this!

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    This is so beautifully written :) your word choice and tempo of the piece is just wonderful!

    Great job!