Very beautiful, you have chosen your words so carefully.

I think there is another version of Cinquain which depends on using words as noun/adjective/verb... Once more it was a lovely read. Thank you for sharing.

Beautiful. I love the fourth line.

This is brief, but beautiful. Amazing.

P.S. GB, yes there is. I wrote one for our English class. You can see it on my page its titled, Frogs.