Comments : Until i'm sober.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Thanks for your comment, Shanky.
    And what a great piece this is - blunt and to the point. Well written.

  • 8 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice
    your name tittle is more interesting
    busy poet.

  • 8 years ago

    by anand singh

    First i'd like to say thank you for reading my poems of faith. This is a realistic piece you wrote about alcohol consumption, that speaks from your heart. I wish you luck with your sobriety. I was once hooked on the bottle but Jesus stepped in and took the craving away 18 years ago.

    • 8 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thank you Paul. will try and stay sober.