Comments : Consequences of Youth (Prose Poem)

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Love this. Intriguing write. "......I've burnt so many bridges, I've run out of water to put out the fires." Powerful line.

  • 4 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I agree with Ben, that the line of running out of water for the fires, is so powerful!

    Great metaphors, and #I like how this reads as a short diary entry type poem. Very raw with honesty, remorse and reflection.

    Nice to see you writing.