Well this piece has gone un-noticed for too long...

what a pretty poem!

I love the inspirational message within this poem.. Its elegant and vibrant.

Laughter is the truest of medicine within this life we live... oh this poem is precious and priceless!

As Maple says, this really is a great write and the flow is outstanding. Well done and all the best,
Ben

What a beautiful piece you have penned. I think as we grow there are so many things we find wrong with ourselves. To be able to bring laughter into our life is a wonderful thing.
I love the night also, many times I dream of going to far off places.
Excellent job
Take care Cindy

Oh my word!

This is breathtaking. I feel privileged to have been taken on a most intimate journey - yours! The serene calmness I felt as you led me through an almost dreamscape of emotional perception was meditative.

I wish now I had a vote to nominate this excellent piece. I hope someone else has done so, because this is a winner in my eyes.

Excellent work.

Take care *winks*

Michael