Love how you expanded on the tale about the swallows, even more description here, very well done, Michael!

They feed whilst on the wing,
Side by side they're strong,
'though some will fall,
like, sad tears
to the
Sea.
^^^
Beautiful analogy:)

5/5 Ingrid x

Amazing effort and very beautiful shape. I adore this format, your wording and the flow are so harmonic.
I'm very glad I read this, indeed awesome.

Another beautifully crafted piece, Michael - you really are a very talented writer. A worthy nomination - hope it wins