Comments : MEMZY I LOVE YOU MORE THAN I CAN SHOW

  • 8 years ago

    by Camellia

    You deserve a 5/5 . You manage to create good rhymes almost everywhere..I can't manage a single lol.
    Okay, one more thing,the line:

    You are an angel sent from up above

    I think up and above wouldn't go together like that. Above can mean Heaven too just like up.
    So if you leave out the up,it will sound correct and have a rhyme nevertheless.

    Like : "You are an angel sent from above,
    to take care of me and shower me with love."

    That's all I gotta say. Sayonara!