Comments : A beautiful life

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The first two lines really caught me - I love the idea of wolves being scared by the night skies - and then the rest of the poem unfurled excellently. Good write.

  • 4 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I can see lots of potential in your work, I like the short lines, and the choppy pace, and also the idea of how you have inserted lots of fairy-tale like stuff like the horses, butterflies etc.

    Nice job, welcome to the club.

  • 4 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Good to see you back. A captivating write.