This really is an exceptional piece of writing,; well done guys.

I remember this Greek Mythology story it was quite sad, and both of you did a magnificent job remaking the story of it.
I adore Greek Mythology because it teaches the reader the tragedies that can happen in life and this poem was teaching that when it comes to love lust shouldn't be added into the mix if you're trying to save the one you breathe for. Lovely job both of you!

5/5

- Moria Bella Bair.

Blaaaah, I've read this ten times and every time it gets better!!

Excellent Collab :))

This was wonderful to read. Great imagery and a topic I can relate to. This piece is awesome.