Comments : Friend of your demons

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A superbly written piece and well thought out

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    To be completly honest I can't even comment on this properly, I'd say that i've read it fifteen times or more, each time I find something else that leaves me sad for you and something else that strikes a chord with me.

    It is beautifully written, flawless in fact and it just leaves me either complety numb or totally emotional.

    You are freakin epic. Period.

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    When you dig deep, you don't hold back, one of the many reasons I admire your poetry. You take a personal look into what you are dealing with, and you mesmerize the reader with your strength and courage.... Your spiritual beauty shines within you and your poetry reflects that... That my dear is beauty within darkness, well deserved win!

  • 8 years ago

    by Camille

    You have been in a place where others dare not go. Be at peace

  • 8 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Judging comment:

    I absolutely love the opening line Chelsey uses here. Everyone has their own form of demons and it's wonderful when we find someone who is willing to help you deal with them.

    Though this poem is filed with such sadness throughout it I can't help but still feel a tiny spark of hope seeping through it. The help offered, the determination to beat those demons with someone and setting yourself free already shows the underlying courage and strength of character.

    "Recognize they do not like me either. Their other mission is to destroy me in destroying you. " Favourite line. People often forget that when they're struggling with their demons, their loved ones are too by watching them deal with it.

    Beautifully written.

  • 10 months ago

    by Jojo

    So beautiful! I relate to every word!