What a tremendously original write. Excellent

Ha!!!!!!

My love where have you been!? Well more like where have I been, but,omg I miss your work!!!

Love love love the story telling type of tone here!!
The details were to the extreme which is so enticing to your readers

Love the random subject this was on too.

This is a horrible comment as I am on my phone, but just stopping by for a quick read and to say hello!!

Sweet Jesus I didn't understand a single bit of this poem maybe because I'm not a sports person so I didn't understand this but I saw the vivid picture playing along my mind and it was nice to read my dear friend. I hope that you had fun making this poem! :)