Comments : To Be Happy

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely poem Cassie - again with a lovely, unforced flow.

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I liked this when I was reading and counting words the other day, but now that I'm actually taking it all in, I really like it. I think you tried a bit too hard with the rhymes, but otherwise this is great. It truly is how to be happy, suggestions, but still it makes the reader smile just thinking about themselves doing these things. Nicely penned.

  • 8 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    I really enjoyed reading this one and I even do one of these to cheer myself up!

    Loved your turn of phrase in the last few lines, I felt it gave a twang of individualism.
    for me the rhymes were done well =)

    would have beaten mine easily!

  • 8 years ago

    by Alex

    I am on who lingers in dreams so had a smile when i read that line.. also could not agree more about spending a moment out in nature.. she really can rid you of some negative feelings
    Nice read..

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    What a charming little poem...so glad I found this one! It just reminded me of the movie Mary Poppins for some reason...absolutely loved it :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Cassie this is a very cool write :) your word choice for it was flawless! It has a certain charm that when you read it you can't help but smile:)

    Saved to favs :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is so sweet, it is so true that we often wait for happiness to magically appear and find us, where we should be finding it for ourselves. You have listed some small ways that people often find this for themselves, as it is different for everyone, but you have worded this poem so well, and especially for being in limited words!

    Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Simply amazing.
    great.