Another wonderful piece. Your poetry is effortless.

Correographs = Choreographs? :) Or is this something different? My brain... mush. lol.

This is beautiful. I always love your nature poems, they just settle with me in a different way than others' nature poetry does.

"cryptic
notations mate within
circles of life."

This felt so spiritual to me, and I think it's because of the message I listened to recently. Talking about God being in control but allowing us control... and in your words I see how the world can influence our lives, creating a havoc, yet doing so so cryptically we may not even realize the influence others have over our lives.

Does that make sense? LOL I'm just rambling. I love that we have such different worlds and yet know we always relate to one another. I so appreciate you and our friendship!

You have a typo in melodies in the last stanza, btw :)

I simply love this poem. It's just beauty, with such a strong, deep message. I feel you breathing a breath of relief with this. :) Love you!