Comments : Feint tears

  • 10 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Clever and accomplished writing. Well done

    • 10 years ago

      by Shruti

      Thank you.

  • 10 years ago

    by shloka

    Why would you put in the dark section though?

    • 10 years ago

      by Shruti

      Hi Shloka,
      this poem is actually about darkness. Here, 'Immortality' signifies evil. The 2nd line shows how the innocence of a newborn child can feel the presence of darkness.....the unexplained....its beginning...

  • 10 years ago

    by Eithne

    So you are into dark poems. I see....................

  • 10 years ago

    by shloka

    Aye. @shravaniB I told u not to be online until u complete yur those assignments. Wut are u doing here?

    Ok I understand what you are trying to imply sharodi.

  • 10 years ago

    by Eithne

    #hater. Boo.

    Oh and great verse by the way. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    NICE AND SWEET

  • 10 years ago

    by Sai Vara Prasad Potharaju

    Simple n beautiful. 5/5