Comments : First Love

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Firstly, welcome to pnq.
    Secondly, what a wonderfully penned first piece. This really does display talent. I absolutely love the 3rd stanza. Well done and I look forward to reading more of your work,
    All the best,

    • 4 years ago

      by John Lock

      Hi Ben,
      Thank you so much for your kind comment and glad you enjoyed reading this little poem.