Comments : Sadly

  • 8 years ago

    by GB

    How much longer will you accept the bonds of society

    ^^ It terrifies me to think of the answer to this question.

    The forth stanza talks about the US but it feels like talking about my own home :(

    Smashing read, thank you very much for sharing your thoughts.

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bob your writing always leaves me thinking. Excellent job!
    Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Koan

    Sadly.... indeed!!! Keep it singing Brother!!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A thought provoking poem... So well written!

  • 8 years ago

    by J Nair

    Bitter truth - each one of it.
    Very Strong message, Bob.

    Many a times when we stop to think, we wonder is society formed for us or are we mere pawns for the societies to run. And can we do without them.

    Thank you Bob.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Such,a sad society we live in