Hello Jennifer,

nice to see you here on P&Q. This poem is intense and erotic. It is full of deep description and lustful imagery. My favourite part is this:
...as we intertwine with one another as if you are lost piece of me. the piece that I've been searching for
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This is timeless and something a lot of people on here will be able to relate to.
BTW the place for erotic poems is in the explicit section.

I hope this helps.

Take care,

Michael