Comments : The River Once More

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hi
    This is an excellent and thoroughly effective piece in terms of the structure and the way it is written. A desperate poem which has an increasingly desperate pace as it continues, Well done and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    This is such a sad but wonderful write, sometimes i find repetition kills a poem for me unless used well and you used it perfectly, beautifully desperate descriptions ...amazing write.

  • 7 years ago

    by that Dude

    Wow