Although this poem is long, it doesn't take long to read, the flow is good and your use of language is well selected that it is easy to read from one line to the next.

I like the honesty in the poem and the reflection you have upon the past, your life, your choices etc.

Another nice write to read from you, and I hope others take the time to read this too.

Beautiful Write :)

I love how you describe emotions in this piece and the flow and word choice etc is wonderful.

Nominated - this should be on the front page :)

Double post sorry lol must've got excited!

Hello Jay,

Should you stay or should you go?

Good question... how can a heart answer in the confines of loyalty and love, These are good traits and ones you should look for in others. No person who shows you poor respect, no loyalty and paper love deserves you. Your answer: Go girl, find a decent person who will keep your heart safe.

Take care and thank you for sharing this emotional and well written poem.

Michael