Comments : Stethoscopic Muteness

  • 4 years ago

    by Koan

    Oh this is beautifully sad.. If I could I would nominate this but I cant... yet... Thx for the read

    • 4 years ago

      by Meme

      And thanks for the comment :)

  • 4 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Meme,

    I really should know better than to read sad poems before bed...

    My pillow becomes damp and thats just not nice.

    The memories of a loved one linger long after they
    have departed. The smell, their belongings all trigger memories. But when we sleep we dream and its like
    they are back. We see them, touch and even feel

    This sadness of imagining this final loss is fretful.

    Well done...

    A slight typo on the word: '...stands'

    Take care.


    • 4 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks for the correction, totally missed that!

      And tell me about it, I always do that mistake n read a sad piece before I sleep. Not good -_-