Ah, Joey I never read your work before but am looking forward to reading.

So anyone who knows me well knows I don't like repitition in a poem, but I actually really enjoyed the use of "I try" here. I like the way you use it, perfectly punctuated too!

And I actually found this poem to be encouraging because you use that word. Its a feeling we've all been through but if its something we see someone actually is trying to push through it.

Well done.