This does indeed have a dark feel to it - full of suspense and chilling. well written. My only suggestion would be "peered outside the open window and not "peed" unless, of course, you really were desperate for a pee...
All the best,
Ben

The last line is the x factor of the poem.

Rally a nice one

Nice poem Shruti.
Easy to connect to the idea of suddenly waking up at an odd hour deep into the night and finding the stillness of the night quite disturbing..
awarness of waiting for someone's return...

Really picturesque piece. Well done.

A beautiful piece with a serene feel to it test sombre in that we Can all no doubt relate at waking at an ungodly hour to quietness and the moon has disappeared behind the clouds leaving us in darkness if there was no street light and some of us waiting for that someone too, makes it eerie doesn't it being alone.

Em