Really lovely how you displayed this on the screen, in the form or a hot air balloon, right?
It takes us along on your flight in a very light hearted way.
Well done, Michael!
3 years ago
by Ben Pickard
This is excellent Michael. Visions of floating happily along over the city of lights in a hot air balloon on a warm summer's evening - that's how I see it anyway!
Needless to say how clever your structure is here - the brothers Montgolfier would be proud of this - wonderful!
All the best
Michael, Your poetry along with its interesting pictography adding to the imagery also is a lesson in history.
I had no clue about 'Montgolfier' but comments from Ingrid and Ben made me check this out on google and there was so much of information that you have geniusely incorporated into this Acrostic form of poetry..
This is really interesting!! It is something I would enjoy cooperating in my writings. I am adding this to my favorite list, I know I will be coming back for it. I need to do a little more research on this.
Thank you sooo much for referring it to me :) It is too late to change my poem here, but I will play with it on my own!!