Hello ColeIan,
welcome to poems & quotes.
A heart-warming poem.
I love the optimism in it. Life has its ups and downs, but we should sometimes try to forget our stress and enjoy life....and this poem do describes it well.
Good and keep writing.
5/5
~S

The flow is a bit rocky, however, I like the content of the poem. The cheerful tone. It's always nice to have a reminder to not give up specially to be reminded that life may be hard but that it is also good...

Thanks for sharing and welcome to poems and quotes