Comments : Should I thank you for a pleasant surprise?

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Jay
    This is wonderful poetry and the end note made it that much more powerful. How do we react when a lost love calls us out of the blue? Much like this, I guess - hearts "thumping in madness at our togetherness". I love that line and loved this piece, Jay.
    Well done and all the very best,
    Ben.
    ps. I will nominate this on Monday when I have some votes back.

    • 8 years ago

      by J Nair

      Thank you Ben, your appreciation really motivates me.