Comments : I: Per Lunam

  • 8 years ago

    by BeautifulSoul

    Nominated!

  • 8 years ago

    by Bob Shank

    One of the best poems I've read in awhile despite it going against my pet peeve......add up how many times you used the word "the", it would read so much better if you simply got rid of most of them. .....nice job though.