Comments : The Butterfly on the end of his nose. Fallen Angel 18

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The first stanza of this poem is very cleverly written. Great start to the instalment. I like the idea of man becoming immune to evil and destruction - again, a sad truth.
    Then the final two stanzas which have become the hallmark of these pieces - black humour.
    He almost "warmed to nature", but instead, he "pulled the butterfly into his gob..."!

    Another great write, Darren

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks again, I didn't know where I was going with this one. Almost turned him good.