Comments : He takes a day away from the madness. Fallen Angel 9

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Darren,
    Of the many wonderful instalments I've read so far, this one struck me as having the most powerful lines throughout. Not to belittle the others - they are all excellent - but this one is probably my favourite so far.

    "elsewhere, ten boys kicked one boy black then six girls teased one girl until she wanted to die"
    ^^^^^^^

    How very sad but how very true, Darren. Too often do we hear variations of these same stories.

    "He watched as men destroyed the earth's lungs"
    ^^^^

    This I like simply for the seemingly effortless imagination you display throughout all these pieces - this really is a visual and imaginative line.

    And then "even he was bored with it all" - a damning analysis of the human race here - even HE was bored of it all, yet we continue....

    Brilliant, Darren.

    All the very best and I hope you are well,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks once again Ben.