Comments : He watches the lung choke. Fallen Angel 3

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh I love your poems so much.... Really glad you reposted this pieces.... sighs... You know how to grab the reader with powerful and in your face wording... love this!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks maples.

      always appreciate you reading,

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Good God, man, these are wonderful! I know I said I would stop, but I am gripped, not least by your powerful, gripping and thoroughly detailed writing. Dare I suggest that these are getting better as I go? lol
    Truly, all jokes aside, this mammoth work is a real achievement from what I've read so far. How long did it take you?
    And now I really must go - my kids are crying in hunger! For myself, the "eject brain tissue" has just about ruined my once healthy appetite!
    All the best Darren - I will continue tomorrow.
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks Ben, better feed them kids. Thanks for your comments, really appreciated.

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Wow! am left without words to express my feelings or emotions towards this beautifully composed poem. Creating a virtual that lights up the imagination from within to capture the essence of the image portrayed in your poem. Least I can say is, well done.

    All the best
    Busy Poet.

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks BP, much appreciated.

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Wow! This is good stuff Darren!
    Have read it several times now. This is great work.
    And yes, Death is always the winner...
    When will man ever learn!

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks Gnome,

      impressed that you can read, when did you learn?

      thanks for reading Peter.
      always good to chat to you

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is excellent.. Why can I give it just a 5? Lol

    Such captivating words and beauty in your writing

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks Em, appreciate your comment.