Lol, well be glad it was just water!

I would like the poem more if you made the b in burst a lower case b:)

Well done,

((hugs)) xx

HAHA! Michael - brilliantly funny and completely eclipses mine in humour!
That end line really is superb!
All the best
Ben

Michael
I always hesitate before I read your poetry ~smiles~
I never know what I'm going to find. Like a surprise package. You have a way of splashing the readers right in the face....lol..getting serious now.....Hahaha..rotflmfao....
Now I got myself going.....lol...someone is tickling my feet...really now on more of a somber note. Nice job on your Senryu
*big hugs
Cindy

You have a hot water bottle in bed?
At your age?! lol!

This poem bursts humour just like a hot water bottle How lovely :-)

This poem bursts humour just like a hot water bottle How lovely :-)

Michael. Thought I would look back over peoples older pieces and I came across this one of yours and I thought "hmm what could he mean but with you it would never be rude" right? lol ;)

Anyway a fantastic and funny senyru which packs a punch line to make anyone laugh out loud well it did me anyway.
Also, would have liked to have seen Bens pee poem haha
Em

Truly humorous and yeah what a relief! nice work Michael