Comments : Heart's Haven

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Cassie,
    So good to see you writing again and what a beautiful, delicate and accomplished return!
    This really is a smooth and flowing piece of poetry - the rhyming and rhythm are exquisite throughout and the sentiment is lovely.
    Well done and all the very best.
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is beautifully written Cassie, a great feeling within this poem, such peace at finding a love that rescues everything about you which is falling apart, a love that leads you to better choices and places.

    The flow really matches the tone, it really matches that imagery of being completely at ease with this person, feeling complete and whole, and like it is exactly where you are meant to be.

    Beautiful work and lovely job at matching the title.