Meena
This really is a very clever write indeed, and thank you for the information regarding the form - I had never even heard of a diatelle.
I hope this is nominated - it deserves to be, but I am out of votes!
All the very best
Ben

A beauty..

Meena
You have turned this form into a excellent poem. So much sadness in your words
Take care
Love Cindy

Congrats Meena.

Congratulations, Meena - I knew this was a winner.
All the best

Congratulations Meena, what a technique. There is so much to learn from you.

And yes the poem did touch a nerve.
The flapping of broken wings, the struggle of a trapped prey.

Thanks for sahring it.

Jay.

This is so beautifully created, both in wording and in looks, it also shows your talent for poetry and I assume some time went into perfecting this.

Beautiful message, both inside and out of the form!

When with you I lay (diatelle)
By Meena Krish (10)

Delightful read. Forms tend to be a little difficult, especially adhering to the rules is increasingly painful to match. As for subject matter, all I can say is, WOW! I normally don't care for sad poetry but, this poem just had the punch in the gut of memories. Reminds me of Adele's song "hello" for some reason. Wonderful write!

Your poetry is beyond beautiful