Love this!

Beautiful

Wonderful writing straight from heart. Keep writing hun. :-)

Congratulations on this piece and the win, Karla.
Ben

Karla
Another poem you have penned....full of metaphors. What images you leave for the readers mind.

and it aches me
^^^
You might want to find another way to say this line. It doesn't read right.

Otherwise nice job
Take care Cindy
Congratulations on your win

Judging comment

Karla's poem this week is breathtaking!

Her brilliant and elegant metaphoric display of the leaf was truly out of this world. the sorrow and madness of the world and events can be felt within each and every line, just beautiful!