Comments : Pieces

  • 5 years ago

    by I da ho

    Bravo

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Steph,

    This really is an engrossing read. It is detailed, personal, honest and wonderfully written.
    I guess we do lose bits of our self as we go through life, but the important thing is that those experiences make us stronger. Your poem finishes on a positive note, and it sounds like you are stronger for the hurts you have suffered.
    I will nominate this on Monday (I am out of votes at present) - superb work.
    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 5 years ago

    by J Nair

    Dear Steph,
    A very emotional and sincere write. The best part is that each and every lost bit is accounted and noted for and the strength has been drawn from within to give each lost part its due farewell thus cleansing and healing the self in such a way that you emerge a stronger sturdier and meaningful you.

    Thanks for sharing.
    Jay

  • 5 years ago

    by Em

    Very engrossing, emotional and sincere piece.

    Em

  • 5 years ago

    by Em

    Very engrossing, emotional and sincere piece.

    Em