Comments : Love Is...

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello, Shanaya and welcome to PNQ.

    A lovely little poem from you here with some great lines. "Your breath is my wine" I particularly like the idea of.

    A couple of suggestions, though. In the third line you have written "our live is for everyone...." Did you mean "our love"?

    Also (and this is only my opinion) had you considered dropping the capital letters? Personally I find them distracting but the choice is yours, entirely.

    Overall, a lovely first write here and welcome again!

    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Greeter

    Love is you. Love is me... <--- those lines summarize the meaning love is for you. I enjoyed the read.

    Welcome to poems and quotes.