This is a stunning piece truly made to pop through its simplicity. I love the mixture of voices here and how the remembrance of this idea/person/conversation was enough to write something so effortlessly captivating.

This is very comforting to read even if an outsider can only understand a portion of it - your personal aspect is still beautifully penned.

Nicely penned, although personally I feel the style should have been a little more... creative, because there's an entire dynamic level of intrigue that seems to be missing here.

Dear Yakari,

Your poems are more answeres than questions. More arrived than seeking.

Whatever expereinces and journeys have brought about this strength - its admirable to see someone turning adversities into their strength.

A Fire never need to apologise for being a fire.

All the vey best - keep writing. Iam a big fan always look forward to your writings. :)

Jay