Comments : Why did we brake up

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    WOw so i broke up with my boyfriend 2 months ago we both practically in love for 2 years now its over and he HATES Me becuz my cuzin yelled @ him and he thinks i did it purposily but i wouldnt do that 2 him ever and now he is happy and i sit here and cry every nite i ask myself why did we break up? but this poem was really inspirational....i just hope GOd has a good plan for me... :) well good job
    JessicA*

  • 17 years ago

    by Mary

    Hey u dont have to make it long to be good try and use higher words and i might give you a good or even an excellent. I am very hard in checking poems i want you to improve

  • 17 years ago

    by tiara

    Hey your poem like it so confused me words were like every were try to fix it hun

  • 17 years ago

    by MEMI

    Aww its cute