Comments : What I Want

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely poem here about the kind of yearning for someone that only true and passionate love can bring.

    "I want to sketch your face with my fingers"

    ^^^^^

    A lovely opening line that pulled me in.

    This poem has a soothing flow to it and is a pleasure to read.

    Happy new year and all the very best,
    Ben