Comments : My Own Mind

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hi Allie and welcome to the site.

    A dark and claustrophobic poem from you here. I love the last couple of lines: "If you're stuck in your own mind, you gotta get out. That's a dangerous place to be." - very true.

    Well done and keep writing,
    Ben

    • 3 years ago

      by Allie

      Thank you Ben!

  • 3 years ago

    by Ciara

    This poem is exactly like my poems so i think we may have the same back story. If you want 2 talk or anything hit me up. Its a very well written poem & i feel every word. Read mine if you like.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    Alot of people could relate to this piece. Very deep and meaningful.

    'see our stories aren't so different. We let someone take control of our mind, we let them choose our fate.' That's powerful and for many people very true, we are all quite similar if we look closely.

    • 3 years ago

      by Allie

      Very true, this was written for my first one, "Over", as to why she did it. Thank you

  • 3 years ago

    by Rsan

    This here is very intense and most people including me can relate to it..Keep up the excellent writing

    Rsan

  • 2 years ago

    by Milo

    The mind can be your own prison.