Comments : Cliffhanger

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is beyond powerful....deep from the soul, excellent poem Bob

  • 4 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Well written.
    well said.

  • 4 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Bob,

    well done on this excellent piece of writing. Often sadness from battling lives hardships come across best of all in a creative form. The recollection of previous apprehension and missed opportunities is powerful. But, perhaps the clever part and one I can relate to is how we take the burden and suffering of others and make it our own. Sometimes it is best to recognise what belongs to us, what we can do and what we cannot. This poem has summed that up.

    Well done on this win Bob.

    Take care,


  • 4 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congratulations on your win!
    Always a pleasure to read your verses. This is no exception.
    Take care

  • 4 years ago

    by Zinat Faisal

    Really a poem of deep emotion. I enjoyed reciting it.

  • 4 years ago

    by Deana

    Wow! feels like old times!

    As usual a writing that touches the heart of the reader, pulls at the emotions and then settles in reality! Awesome job Bob, as always!

  • 4 years ago

    by Ren

    This is an excellent poem!
    Congratulations on the win! :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Em

    A very deep poem that a lot of people can relate to as it talks about lifes hardships and battling through then no matter how hard we want to give up.

    Captivating non the less.

    Well done

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging comment

    This writer has his own style and way of writing that leaves the reader speechless.

    I admire poets who can reach into the darkness of their soul and stick to the principles of the way they choose to write. This poem reads with flow and elegance.

    To take on the pain and anguish of others, to take the pain away.... the suffering of humanity... that is what I am reading with this piece. Bob has went above and beyond with perfection in this poem, just beautiful!

  • 4 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Powerful writing... very indepth.. reaching the soul. I
    I love it.

    A deserved win! :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Rsan

    Excellently penned..

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautiful, captivating and inspiring all at once.