Andrea,

This really does have a dark feel to it and it is written exquisitely. Your use of alliteration in this piece is marvellous - just right - not overdone and never forced.

".....of the madness that sows such sorrow"

^^^

This just skates of the tongue beautifully.

Well done and all the very best,
Ben

Andrea
I love reading your verses. My favorites together. Snow and darkness. Love the imagery you have created. Brings such chilling pictures to the minds eye.
Excellent job!
Take care
Cindy
~ hugs~

This dark poem is brilliant Maple Tree!
Such clever wording and a great descriptive imagery that paints a picture of such sorrow and sadness.
Nice work!

Man. that was great. thanks for letting us in.

Beautiful, we are always fighting with ourselves, amazing what can be hidden