Comments : Gods Valley

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard


    Wonderful rhyme and story throughout - maybe one of the best I've read from you. This one really tugged at the old heartstrings!
    Take care and well written indeed,

  • 6 years ago

    by Cindy

    This brings tears to my eyes. It is so beautiful yet so seems someone you loved has turned to another.. How painful that must be...My heart goes out to you.
    Excellent job!
    Take care

    • 6 years ago


      It's an old poem which I wrote long time back. Thought I should give it an airing. Lol!

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Peter,

    I read this the other day on my phone. It is such a sad piece of love poetry that I am sure most people can relate to. I know I can.

    Helping someone back to a point where they can trust men again only to loose them because now they don't need you is probably the worst way to loose a lover. Worse than death?

    A poem well written and coming from a place of raw experience.

    Take care Peter and thank you for sharing.


    • 6 years ago


      Thanks for your nice comments Michael. Yes, as I recall it does seem a 'fate worse than death' when almost overnight, one is discarded as 'irrelevant', and is left with huge feelings of Love that then has to be somehow dissipated on ones own, often taking several years to erase all those once happy shared memories.
      It's a shame women like that don't come with a health warning. Lol!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is such a heartfelt yet sad piece with fluency throughout. Tugged at the heartstrings and captivated me from start to finish.

  • 5 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Memories speak louder than presence. It pains to lose what could have been. There's always a place called Forward. Nothing has come to stay, than Truth.

    Good thinking, great inking!
    #Hoping you find some inner peace..