Hello,

I like the refrain. It cleverly steers the reader, helps them to understand the pain of words, especially lies.

The simille of a cold heart 'coal surrounded by darkness' was effective.

Another good poem.

Well done and take care,

Michael

Sis you did amazing, and I really like it you took your time. Well I hope that you will write more sis.

Lilith,

This is a real deep Poem. With a deep meaning behind it. Words can hurt and I for one know that first hand as they stay forever. Such a powerful, emotional write.

Em