Hello Noor,

The past is symbolised well here with your castle reference.

Agood write.

Take care,

Michael

Beautiful write.

Noor,

This really is a thoroughly emotional and moving little piece of poetry from you.
All the best and take care,
Ben

Beautiful words Noor, simply beautiful!
Loved this!

Very cute words....

When a little lost girl
Found a piece of heaven
In your arms

yes you are right here, the feeling of real love is not less than heaven

Hello Noor

Wonderful written , Keep it up

Noor,

What a beautiful piece. It is always hard to 'forget' someone that meant so much to you. I can feel the emotion in this piece.

Em